Aria

Posted Aug 29, 2007, 3:02:44 AM UTC

This is the main character in my story, Song of Silver.  You can read it here: http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2307889/1/

Name: Aria
Race: Rhathian

The ancient Omegas, twin beasts of the gods which slumber in the hearts of two mountains, are beginning to have nightmares. What's worse is that the nightmares are becoming real, and seeping into the mortal realm in the form of demonic creatures. If either of the Omegas wake, it could mean imminant destruction for the mortal realm as the forces of Light and Dark become unbalanced.

It is up to Aria, of Rhathian descent and the last of the ancient royal bloodline, to use her inherent song magic and sing the Omegas back to sleep.

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  • Sep 14, 2007, 1:42:46 AM UTC
    Very nice. The matching of colors in this one is wonderfully done. A suggestion might be to add more textures to the hair, which would enhance the picture a good deal.
    • Sep 14, 2007, 1:28:29 PM UTC
      Thanks a lot! Lol, yeah I got lazy on the hair, I'm not very good at digital coloring and I must have redone it a billion times, but I finally just gave up. Maybe in the future I'll edit it and make the hair look more realistic. Smile
  • Sep 5, 2007, 1:15:44 PM UTC
    Great choice of colors for her hair and eyes. They contrast each other beautifully. ^__^
    • Sep 5, 2007, 1:31:45 PM UTC
      omg... u actually critiqued one of my things, i worship your art! :O Dance You're like my rolemodel...

      You just made my week! Big Smile

      Btw, I have a few questions about publishing that I wanted to ask you, such as how you set up your store and stuff and which printer you use. Is it okay if I send you a note about it?
  • Sep 2, 2007, 12:13:42 PM UTC
    I like the shading, and backround, and the way the color is degraded in the earlobe. Is that a jewel she has on the forhead? if it is I like the idea. Very good art you deserve some chocolate chip banana cookies!
    • Sep 5, 2007, 1:33:18 PM UTC
      Chocolate chip banana cookies... *salivates* god I'm huuuungry....

      Yeah it is a jewel on her forehead, it's the source of her "magic", and it shines whenever she casts a spell. Well it's more complex than that in the story, but those are the basics, lol. Smile

      Thanks dear! Hug
  • Aug 30, 2007, 1:55:49 PM UTC
    Vyer nice. I love the sense of light you've captured. She has a very sweet look about her. Smile
  • Aug 29, 2007, 6:13:12 PM UTC
    This is beautifully colored. Yes The only problems I can really see are that her forehead's a little too far set back. And her braids could use more detail. Yes The hair overlaps in a braid. Remember that. Smile

    But overall, great job! Thumbs Up Hope to see more of your stuff!
    • Aug 29, 2007, 7:03:40 PM UTC
      Ooo thanks a lot! ^_^ When you say her forehead is too far back, can you clarify a bit more? It's hard for me to see what you mean, like you think it should be more forward, out towards where her nose is? Smile

      Lol, yeah, and I got pretty lazy on the braids. I'm still working on my hair techniques... I should get some pictures of braids to reference next time. ^_^
      • Aug 29, 2007, 7:13:36 PM UTC
        Bah, no way. Laughing I suck at explaining. But hopefully my Visual Crit will do the talking for me.
        The curve is pretty crappy, because I did this in Paint Slant, but like I said, just a teensy bit too far back. And when I got a better look at it, the eye was just a little bit too low on her face. Smile I hope this helps.
        Image attached
        • Aug 29, 2007, 7:27:46 PM UTC
          Ah thanks soo much! That makes way more sense! ^_^

          I've never been on a site before with visual critiques, this is cool! I'll have to make use of it some time. Wink I'll definitely keep this as reference for future stuff. Big Smile
          • Aug 30, 2007, 5:27:35 PM UTC
            Yeah, visual crits are VERY handy. Laughing Especially since my explanatory skills leave a lot to be desired. It makes things easier when the problems can be remedied from Paint, which is all I really have. xD

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