"Is This What You Want?"

Posted Nov 12, 2007, 1:21:37 PM

Finished version. I attempted to darken the shadows before I posted, but I'll let you be the judge. I love his grin.

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  • Jul 31, 2009
    Hey there!

    A little while back I did some artwork for you, which is posted here: http://bonbon3272.deviantart.com/art/The-Hunter-66737607

    I had a person inquire about using it in one of their downloadable games for the public. I thought I'd ask you first since it is your character before making any decision about it.

    Let me know, thanks! I have the original email if you want to see exactly what the guy does with people's art.

  • Nov 12, 2007
    This is a little better in darker values, but the shadows are still muddy. The shadows around the face blend right into the hair, with little contrast, the inner part of his open mouth should be darker, and there is not a definitive light source. Perhaps try mixing it up with a dark background too. I do like the way you did his eyes, he is interesting. Keep up the good work.
    • Nov 12, 2007
      Thank you for the critique. I'll try to attempt doing better with the dark values next time I feel like doing a greyscale. Thank you again!