I think this is a really great peice. I love it when people go for bigger sizes! Great use of colour- I never have the patience for pencil crayons. the central figure and the face are the best parts- wonderful job. I think there's a lot of great imagery here. I especially love the fish. But I would probably try to make the other images a little more 3D, it kind of becomes flattened towards the edges, although that might be what you were going for. And I'm sure you already know this, but the quality of the photo definatley takes away from the peice. you should try and either get a better camera, borrow one, or get somebody elese to take the picture for you. But great work, it's a really cool piece.