Vegeta+Bulma - Tender Touch

Posted Dec 4, 2007, 9:28:46 AM

It's been a while since I've drawn Vegeta fanart. He's still the hottest anime character in my mind. Here he is tenderly embracing Bulma.

It's been forever since I've drawn for myself (as apposed to drawing for work/school). I'm fairly satisfied with this sketch. The only things I'm unhappy about at the moment are Bulma's skirt and her hand. I'll probably take a day's break from this and come back to adjust it.

Red pen crits welcome.

I do intend to color this after I get the line art finished :veryhappy:

Vegeta and Bulma from Dragon Ball Z are (c) Akira Toriyama, etc.

[REVISION] - Dec 7
I've uploaded my revision to the linework. I've received some good comments on Bulma. I've revised her hand and her skirt as well as a couple little tweaks on her shirt and legs.

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Comments

  • Dec 4, 2007
    Looks good. Very Happy
  • Dec 4, 2007
    *takes a breath* The hand has fingers that are not smooth, and the pinky starts further off the hand than the other fingers if you where to line the curve of the knuckles up.
    The skirt.. sorta crops off the leg. Making things bulge. If you where to draw a smooth line of where the leg starts from the hip and come down. then the skirt will hang better and the legs will look much smoother.

    I love vegeta...
    • Dec 4, 2007
      Thank you for the crit Lacewing. It was very helpful. Big Smile
      • Dec 4, 2007
        Thanks. I have a hard time doing written crits, often I will print out the image, draw over it.. and scan it back
        • Dec 4, 2007
          yeah i like having drawn crits. it makes it easier to understand often times. thanks again! I'll have an updated drawing up within the next couple days.
          • Dec 5, 2007
            Awesome I look forward to seeing it
  • Dec 4, 2007
    sigh...he still is the hottest, I totally agree. I think I'll always have a thing for Vegeta.
    I dont see anything wrong with this pic, I think it's perfect. I cant wait to see the coloured version.

    Great!
  • Dec 4, 2007
    I always love how you draw these too- your style makes Vege seem such a calmer, nicer person, and Bulma is very femanine ^^ *snuggles BR* so happy to see you drawing again ^^ I miss it Big Smile
    • Dec 4, 2007
      *snuggles back* Thanks Arkillian. I think maybe I need to do some more drawings where he's a little more badass.
      • Dec 11, 2007
        Awe- there's tons of those about the place- I like your cocky, 'I'm so sexy' version of Vege alot more ;) It seems so perfect for his character ^^
        • Dec 11, 2007
          Hahah there's only one proper response to that:
          "Jiita Clothing Line. So sexy, even YOU will f***"
          • Dec 12, 2007
            J-T-taaaaaaa

            *waggles tongue*

            *rawr* ;)
  • Dec 4, 2007
    I love how their bodies are constructed and how you did Bulma's hair. The only thing to me that stands out is Bulma's hand Her pinky specifically I might be a tad short. But over all very nice. I'm glad to see that you're drawing again Yes
    • Dec 4, 2007
      Thanks for the comments Jill. I'll probably have a revised drawing up soon. Smile
      • Dec 5, 2007
        Sure thing ^_^ I'll keep an eye out for it Thumbs Up
  • Dec 20, 2007
    This is beautiful. I've always liked the way that you draw Bejita. The pose is interesting too. The way you draw people...I dunno, almost like they're always floating in air. It creates a nice effect.
    • Dec 21, 2007
      Thank you for the comments Song. I appreciate it a lot ^.^
  • Dec 21, 2007
    nice
  • Dec 15, 2009
    Wow Bulma looks so different, but I love the entire pic ^^ these two are my favorite DBZ couples =D
  • Apr 26, 2010
    test comment on veggie art
  • Dec 12, 2010
    Another wonderful work to show off the style Smile

    You know, your linework reminds me of the art direction of the metal gear solid franchise. Not the coloring style considering that one is wildly different, but the faces in particular. She looks like the female lead in the first game of the "solid" series.

    Great work:)
    • Jan 21, 2011
      Thanks for the comments! I haven't seen much of the metal gear art. i'll check it out!