Golden innocene

Posted Dec 6, 2007, 6:51:15 PM UTC

This is my final assignment for my color theory class. I recieved an A on it.  It was created at neondragon art, with a mouse and a lot of revisions.  The pallet used was a 25 color monochrome of yellows.  Please tell me what you think or what can be fixed.  :)

 

This is also my first post!

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  • May 18, 2009, 10:28:46 PM UTC
    Wow that's terrifying!

    Awesome though, the clothe textures nice, and makes a good opposite with the babies flesh.
  • Dec 7, 2007, 12:43:50 PM UTC
    Those eyes are rather terrifying! I really love the concept of this, but I feel you could have been a little more robust in you shading, which would have rounded out the cheeks and nose. Also, the drawing of those eyes are a bit skewed. I respect that you did this all with a mouse, but your tools are really limiting you.
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    • Dec 8, 2007, 9:56:03 PM UTC
      Thank you. Not only did I do this with a crappy mouse but at neondragonart.com which is an oekaki board. I see what you mean about the eyes and the shading, I will definately fix that when I get my tablet and my photoshop working.
      I have both but both are being not nice with Vista. I was actually afraid of going darker with the shading, I thought it would ruin her for some reason. Beside the skew-eyness of the the eyes why do you think they are so terrifying?
      • Dec 10, 2007, 1:32:07 PM UTC
        The fact that the pupils don't touch the eyelid make her expression very intense. It's not necessarily a bad thing, just something to be aware of.
        • Dec 10, 2007, 2:38:20 PM UTC
          oh, You're right, I never noticed. I have a lot to learn, thank you. When I get a free moment I am gonna try again, only this time with an unlimited pallet.