Nice work. He seems maybe a tiny bit too long in the torso to me, but that may be because of the shoes coming up so high on his legs, that they make them appear shorter than they are. The arm that is in the front pocket seems awkwardly twisted. His elbow should be over and out to the side more. Eyes without pupils on humans bug me, but that is just a personal thing. Thanks for sharing this with us.
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