Tori vs Alyssa

This is of the battle between Ash and Tori in a fic of mine Carpe' Noctem. Sadie commented that Ash looks masculine and I wanted to comment that yes, she does, for a reason. she is supposed to be cold-hearted and evil and in the image she has her hand, well, paw really, wrapped around Tori's neck. She isn't killing her...yet. just threatening her and being generally nasty. Tori and Ash are my own characters, but they are part of a story based on the book Maximum Ride by James Patterson. and yeah, the fur of Ash's hand/paw is done really badly. for some reason I can't do fur.