black rivers

great job! I wish I could do something like that with pen

I like the off / on fell of pens. Ball is great for shading cause of it's control. I use to do this kinda thing with pens HEAPS ^^ Went through pens like a trooper XD LOL

I agree totally about working with pen. You have to pace yourself because you run a higher risk of messing up, but at the same time it makes the picture that much more rewarding when you complete it successfully.

I'd say you were most successful with this. The few lines are lovely, the shading with the pen is most feathery and delicate, and the words just add ambiance to the character. Nice job!