Just a small crit- It took me a bit to realise that her hips are in the air, cause I thought she was flat on her stomach. I'm not sure if the lady is over weight, so take this with a grain of salt, but the stomach muscles are very important for showing where her hips go. My drawing is crap cause I don't draw chicks, but it sorta shows where I'm thinking ^^;
In that case, i'd say her proportions look a bit large width wise. Up to you, but if she's meant to be slim, she'd need about 1/3 of her width taken off her. I can give a visual crit when I get home if you want
Thank you. Sorry I have not been on very much. I appreciate the visual crit but her bady is facing the wrong way I have her facing with her back to the viewers. I'm attaching a similar piece to my original that in my sketchbook. If you want to see the original let me know. Thank you again. I do appreciate. I hope this helps you see what I'm portraying.
Thank you again. I do appreciate. I hope this helps you see what I'm portraying.