Roast you...ok i'll try. Well...I don't think there's nothing wrong with the body...or maybe the pectorals could slightly lower...I feel like the tummy area is too long when you compare it with the pectorals area. Or that the pectorals are too small...I dunno bt my eyes are drawn to that part and I feel something should be done.
I like the face, but somehow it doesn't fit with the body. The long face, long nose...I picture some sort of native american warrior in my head, like an Aztek, Mayan or Inca. That is pretty cool. I just cant picture that head with that body.
I think you really have a good pen stroke...I'll be strolling in your gallerie.
I think you're right especially about the long tummy... I think I went overboard trying to make him look all tall, proud and royal.
Manase is somewhat like an albino Inca from the outside and Saami from the inside I created him later than his decentants so a had fun trying to determine what facial features and other things came from him.
He was the only option where the genes for big size could have come from (I had already finished the designs of all the other options). So I made him buff. Mwahahahaha!