Dezman Lorne-Satar

Posted Sep 9, 2009, 12:35:49 AM UTC

 O.o two pictures in a week!

Little bit of a bio (finally)

"Dezman is a shy and soft-spoken young man, usually hiding amongst the crowd. Though he doesn't usually stand up for himself, he tries to stand up for others, although history has taught him that his trials will always be unsuccessful. Since he doesn't usually go out to make friends, he is uaually kept company by the people of history, as well as fictional characters from stories. 

Unbenownst to his few friends, his numerous enemies (mostly bullies) and even himself his toned-down form hides immense power."

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  • Sep 9, 2009, 9:47:04 AM UTC
    First off, this is an awesome action pose Smile
    Really there's only one thing that I can see that might benefit from some tweaking; the left foot. The angle of the knee and the way he's stretched makes me think having his foot flat on the ground like that might mean a broken ankle Doh
    Perhaps the shoe is perched at an angle on the ground, or the toes face toward the weapon.
    Like I said, this is an awesome action pose, and the more I'm looking at it, your proportions are spot on too! That's one of the toughest battles to fight Wink
    • Sep 9, 2009, 11:57:59 AM UTC

      Feet are definitely not my specialty, and I have a habit of trying out the poses myself, but don't have a timed camera unfortunately ><.



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