Have Sweet and Gentle Dreams
Posted Oct 1, 2005, 9:40:15 PM
A pretty picture of Yanagi, from a manga a friend and I are working on called "Angely i Demony," which is Russian for "Angels and Demons." I love the color in this, but royally messed up her legs and bra. She's supposed to have a ring on the index finger of her left hand, but I couldn't manage to make it look right. Reference used; found on Google.
Whichever you prefer will work fine. I know you'll make it look good. I can tell just by the level of detail I see so far.
If she's on her back, well that changes things. Mostly the legs. I mention this, as I just haven't ruled out the possibility judging by the way her right arm is extended. That's not a bad thing, I think your picture works either way. Its only a few small details that need changing.
Other then that, you've got superb talent with drawing. I can tell from looking at this picture, your craft is well developed. The colors are top notch. On par with anything found in a comic or magazine. If your aim is to be a great comic artist, your well on your way.
Keep up the good work. ^^
I really, really ought to fix it.
she looks really beautiful