Sorcerer of Oremus

Here he is. My Sorcer. Using the Hiro 4 base. Poser is really confusing. So I stuck with DAZ Studio 4. I am a beginner. No rude feedback please.

Story:

The Sorcerers of Oremus

Oremus, the once beatutiful and thriving country on the distant plant of Tone Har. Known as the only place  to hold Humans amonst the thriving clans of Beast Folk. Oremus was famous for their Sorcerers, as they were as powerful as the denizens of Tone Har. All life on Tone har could weild magic, even the most insignifcant bug had a base knowledge of magic. But I am getting side-tracked.

Some of the Beast Folk feared the Humans would grow too powerful and would soon grow power hungry and try to take the other lands by force. So the Beast Folk clans amassed a large army and attacked Oremus. It took several weeks to dindle down the Human's forces. Byt the war's end, very few Humans were left. The sorcerers that were still alive were captured and executed. Save for one. He ended up out living his own kind and is now the only Oremian in existance.