God Rest Ye Merry Gentlemen

Posted Oct 9, 2011, 4:18:32 PM UTC

 

I really like how this turned out c: One of my best yet. Harsh cruitique wanted 8D   References: http://takeyourhatred.deviantart.com/art/Mouth-43009753 by takeyourhatred.deviantart.com http://the-hipster-named-x.deviantart.com/art/Feminine-xD-252160504 by me (it is me >w<)   

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  • Oct 21, 2011, 12:51:52 AM UTC
    It does look wonderful! And I think the best part of it is the hair! Well done!

    Well, if you want some advice to improve, I think it might be proportion. I think the eyes could be a little bigger. They look nice though, the way you drew them.

  • Oct 10, 2011, 10:49:17 AM UTC
    Turned out pretty good. You've frankensteined the angles a little though. The mouth isn't on the same angle as the face (The referenced mouth faces forwards which your face is nearly sideways), but the face doesn't hold right for the new expression. See, the popped cheek bone look works with a smile, but her mouth is open in your picture which flattens out the cheek muscles. I strongly suggest that you chose references which hold the same angle if you're going to splice two references together. Those are the biggest issues I have with this picture, but you look like you put effort in so don't let me take away from that. Just keep and eye what the face does when it changes expression, cause it's so subtle