Moment's Respite WIP 08
Finally starting working on it again. Decided against a third person after all and just go with a wall.
Does it look like anything needs to be fixed in it?
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I see some perspective issues like some contraversion between the stairs and the door behind, and I would suggest to use thinner lines next time with things in the bg, and thicker for foreground things to have a more solid feeling of space but these are relly minor things.
This looks good already.
Yeah i was wondering about colours but in fact I do like already and don't neccesarely suggest to colour. only if you can strenghten it. Like using a certain light scheme to express mood or weather and not just generic colours.
That's my thought at least. ^^
Anyway great job, I'm glad you finished it eventually =D
:3 And thanks so much for the vote of confidence!
I can see your point with the lines. I can go in there and fix it pretty easily (yay for about 30 layers of line art! @_@)
Actually what you say about light colours sounds really nice, i haven't thought about that option but it usually does work well with linearts that are detailed so they don't "overcome" on it.
Haha okay (woah, that's a LOT for juts a lineart XD)
And expect an update by this time next week!