Villain

Posted Jan 11, 2018, 10:39:46 PM

Character Reference sheet for RobotnikHolmes of DA of his villain sona 

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Constructive Critique requested. See Tips.

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  • Jan 12, 2018
    He turned out pretty cool ^^

    What kind of critique would you like?
    • Jan 17, 2018
      Thank you. Uhh well, whatever you think is necessary works.
      • Jan 25, 2018
        Sorry for the delay in reply- I've been recovering from returning to work after a holiday XD

        Bogusred made a really good point which I was going to bring up about the leg being popped out at the hip joint. I feel that I should add to it that the other leg looks like it has a rolled ankle. I think because of the c curve the shin, it looks like the ankle is rolled forwards. If the heel was further backwards it'd totally fix the problem though I think Smile

        The next thing I thought I'd mention, I'm not sure if you were aware but it's scanned on an angle? Or at least I think it is? Does it look correct to you in the attachment?

        The last thing I thought I'd mention and this one is totally optional cause I see that you like to put a lot of texture into this, but there's a lot of clothing wrinkles. It may be the leather's texture to be crinkled like that, but I thought I might mention it as something you may want to consider lowering the contrast on some areas so some wrinkles take priority over others. I hope that makes sense? ^^;

        I love the design though! The extra detailing on the outfit look cool, and I dig the green tips in his hair. The random pattern on the collar areas leather is a great touch- I love that Big Smile I hope to see more of him in the future ^^
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        • Feb 19, 2018
          Thank you very much for your advice and tips. I will take them into account next time. That's weird I don't understand why it would be turned like that.
          • Feb 19, 2018
            It may be cause you're drawing on an angle. if you use a tilted surface and look straight at it, this should cancel the tilt out Smile
  • Jan 15, 2018
    I love the outfit details.
  • Jan 23, 2018
    Interesting character. I like the clothing and accessories!

    As for constructive feedback the left leg looks like it can't connect to the torso well. so it could be pushed in a bit. it might help to do a rough wireframe to check the positions of the limbs.

    I hope this helps. Let me know if there's any specific feedback you're looking for.

    Nice job!
    • Jan 24, 2018
      Thank you so much. I will take your feedback into consideration for next time. I really appreciate it.