OC Redrawn (again)

Posted Apr 14, 2018, 7:46:55 AM

Thought I give my Old OC a new life LOL

Character was supposed to appear in my old comic IMAGICA=verse before I've gone on a (long) hiatus xD
https://tapas.io/episode/446482

Hope you guys like it. :)

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  • Apr 16, 2018
    Redraws are fun. You've made a lot of nice improvements to her. She has more volume than the original. It might help to work on the shading a bit because it feels inconsistent. perhaps add some reflective light (such as under the breast on the drawing on the left). It feels unusually dark. or if the only lightsource is the heart, i would suggest making the lighting even more dramatic and
  • Apr 27, 2018
    Her design has improved, she looks less frail now, which befits her appearance.