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Gazing Into The Sun

Posted Sep 1, 2018, 11:03:39 AM

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  • Sep 25, 2018
    Gosh, I am in love with that hair! It's so colorful and animated! I could easily imagine the wind blowing through it.

    My only critique for you, (and I hope I word it right!) is that the the direction his body faces in contrast with his head looks a bit awkward. Instead of viewing his head from completely at a side view; try it at a 3/4 angle. It'll look more natural.

    Overall this is one heck of a stylish piece ya dished out! Keep up the good work!
    • Sep 25, 2018
      Thank you very much for the very meaty comment!!

      The hair was the main point in this art. I wanted to try and see how I can make it feel like it's in the wind, though to be honest i just followed my gut on how I think it should. The colours were also a factor since I wanted it to be very eye-catching, purely yellow would be too much so the purple is there to add contrast.

      To be honest, I felt the same for the head. I'd say it's at a 4/5 rather than completely to the side, but full sideways could have worked better and i would have just adjusted the body. But thanks for the critique!! I'll make sure to keep in mind body:head angles.

      Thanks for the comment and I hope you enjoy my future works!!