Vindicator Teaser

Posted Apr 26, 2019, 9:26:09 AM UTC

This was some concept art for a possible design for the main character as a way of considering what he might look like in my upcoming story. I guess this could be considered a mock-up of sorts? Even though it doesn't really depict anything besides a sparkling, electrically charged eye.

Anyway, the main character's name is Sirhan (or Sirhaan depending on the version); he's the main character of the story. I planned for this to be a webcomic on Tapas with a mirror posted here on occasion and eventually turn it into an animated series.

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BogusRed
May 18, 2019, 6:24:09 PM UTC
Oh I just realised you are still new here! Welcome to the community by the way! We're happy to have you here.
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- SX-Donutbandit
  May 21, 2019, 11:52:43 PM UTC
  Thanks, I'm glad to be here.
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BogusRed
May 18, 2019, 6:23:38 PM UTC
it's nice and dramatic. i like the use of color. i might even push it to be more extreme by making the fur colors darker to contrast with the glowing eye.

the eyebrow feels a bit flat. it might help to make it look more like fur with some ragged edges? I am not sure. i don't have experience with anthros.
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MaskedLin
May 10, 2019, 4:13:54 AM UTC
You caught the dramatic feel great here, the focus on the eye is intense and sets up for action well. The green lighting could be incorporated better though, it feels less like lighting and more like green bits on the face. Overall, nice cover
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- SX-Donutbandit
  May 12, 2019, 1:20:45 PM UTC
  Thanks! I really did try my best to make it an epic piece.
  Yeah, I guess I did go a bit overboard with the lighting there. I could probably have toned it down a bit.
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  MaskedLin
  May 15, 2019, 5:52:05 AM UTC
  I don't think its overboard, I just think it could mesh onto the face better. The only lighting i see here is green, so that would cause a green tint on all of the other colors, like the brown and especially the white. I think a thin layer of overall green lighting would help the cohesion of the strong energy effects. Sorry if I wasn't being clear!
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