I see you've requested a critique. I think it could be improved a bit with the composition. Try to place the focal point (which appears to be the place where they're heads touch) along one of the four points in a thirds grid. See Rule of thirds: https://expertphotography.com/improve-your-composition-the-rule-of-thirds/
Having your focal point so close to the left edge creates tension. Having it along a third makes it feel more comfortable.
Ty! I will keep that in mind! I want to make these two into a finished piece or a series. I'm gonna work on their designs more. This link will come in handy!
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I see you've requested a critique. I think it could be improved a bit with the composition. Try to place the focal point (which appears to be the place where they're heads touch) along one of the four points in a thirds grid. See Rule of thirds:
https://expertphotography.com/improve-your-composition-the-rule-of-thirds/
Having your focal point so close to the left edge creates tension. Having it along a third makes it feel more comfortable.