Brothers in Spirit

Posted Jun 23, 2019, 6:18:22 PM UTC

This is the first of my attempts to capture my cats' unique 'odd-couple' essence.

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  • Jul 12, 2019, 2:09:29 PM UTC
    so cute!

    I see you've requested a critique. I think it could be improved a bit with the composition. Try to place the focal point (which appears to be the place where they're heads touch) along one of the four points in a thirds grid. See Rule of thirds:
    https://expertphotography.com/improve-your-composition-the-rule-of-thirds/

    Having your focal point so close to the left edge creates tension. Having it along a third makes it feel more comfortable.
    • Jul 16, 2019, 6:15:53 AM UTC
      Ty! I will keep that in mind! I want to make these two into a finished piece or a series. I'm gonna work on their designs more. This link will come in handy!
  • Jun 23, 2019, 6:39:32 PM UTC
    Here's another IRL photo.
    Image attached
  • Jun 23, 2019, 6:38:25 PM UTC
    Here they are IRL.
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