I see you've requested a critique. I think it could be improved a bit with the composition. Try to place the focal point (which appears to be the place where they're heads touch) along one of the four points in a thirds grid. See Rule of thirds: https://expertphotography.com/improve-your-composition-the-rule-of-thirds/
Having your focal point so close to the left edge creates tension. Having it along a third makes it feel more comfortable.