That is amazing! first off, and the tengu's right arm seems a little awkward in the position, but fits in relation to the other's head. I would suggest maybe having the arm be a little longer, as the forearm's normally shorter than the part attached to the shoulder itself. Hope that makes sense. ><
Thank you! That does make sense. I tried to find lots of pictures of young men hugging horse's heads... And Google found just one. :-P The pose was sweet looking but felt awkward in the photo as well, if you looked at it too close.