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Look At Me

Posted Dec 28, 2019, 4:23:18 AM
Theah is so bad at looking people in the eye. He just wants her to look up, so she'll see how much he cares.

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  • Dec 30, 2019
    Hiya DragonLady o/

    Right now Theah is looking kind of stiff. I think it would help to do some gesture studies of photos of similar poses. try to act it out, exaggerate it a little and maybe have someone take your picture.

    I hope this helps!