One Hell of a Summer

Posted Feb 22, 2020, 6:10:22 AM UTC

Carmilla Season 2 fanart, also filling the "Summer" prompt for the 100 Themes Challenge.

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  • May 2, 2020, 5:44:47 AM UTC
    Ooo- that red is very eye grabbing. I love it ^^
  • Feb 27, 2020, 11:26:53 PM UTC
    The face of the girl has some alignment and proportion issues. The mouth and nose seem crooked and the eyes seem too small or the head is too large.

    I would suggest spending some time sketching heads to get a better handle on proportions. If you do a google image search for "head proportions" or "face proportions" you'll find a plethora of diagrams to help you see the measurements and relationships of the features.

    - tear ducts should align with the corner of lips
    - space from edge of eye to edge of head should be less than the width of the eye
    - space between eyes is about the width of an eye or a little larger

    The shape of the horse head also has some issues. Sketching out some horse heads with basic shapes before going into your final illustration can help you get a feel for the proportions.

    I hope this helps!
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    • Feb 27, 2020, 11:33:14 PM UTC
      Thank you! I knew there was something off with the face but wasn't sure how I would have fixed it. I'll definitely need to do some face practicing. And I'd never heard about the tear ducts and the corners of the lips before...