One Slash

Posted Dec 26, 2005, 6:12:36 PM UTC

Kenshin when he was battousai, after he got his first slash from Akira.

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Horokeu
Dec 27, 2005, 7:16:45 PM UTC
Alright, well... the colors of his hair and skin and clothes should be more blended in together... If you can, I'd like to see him look a bit more 3-D also. That's about it though. =] The drawing itself looks nice!
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- bloodysmurf
  Dec 29, 2005, 3:18:36 PM UTC
  Im not sure if I could go back and fix it..butthanks for the advice! ^-^
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ArkillianDragon
Dec 26, 2005, 4:57:21 PM UTC
Two areas of critique- just cause you want it- pencil lines should only be seen if they need to be seen for texture- the hair lines should all start from the scalp, and finish at the tip of the hair in one stroke, and cloth would be a slight cross hatch. For example (I'm sorry if this hyperlink doesn't work) <a href="http://www.deviantart.com/view/26816214/"></a> in this picture, her hair flows from root to tip, although it is noticable when I got lazy. The background is sort of textured, but its not noticable, cause most of the pic is like that. My suggestion, if you want a flat area of colour, is to buil up your colour to make it solid, use a different medium, or do digetal. Hope this helps
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- bloodysmurf
  Dec 26, 2005, 6:23:31 PM UTC
  I actually did this one a while back also. Ill see what happens if I go back and color over it to make it look better. Ill also go look at the hyperlink you gave me right after this ^-^ Thanks so much!!
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  ArkillianDragon
  Dec 26, 2005, 9:49:20 PM UTC
  Ohhhh- I never go back to old stuff, eh? When I draw a picture, I have a very specific mood, and if that is broken, or if I come back to it, it is very hard to rekindle, unless its a powerfull feeling. I get huge *motions with hands* scrap pile that none except I see of pictures that were fun, but didn't quite cut it for finalising cause I lost the passion for it. This doesn't mean that they are bad pictures though. For example http://www.deviantart.com/view/25339219/ This one I drew of my current RP character in a game called Spycraft- HILARIOUS pic, but the drive to ink it never happened ^^; It's not a bad pic, but I'll never go back to it.
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