[ DS ] Raffle Entry 1

Posted Jun 27, 2020, 12:33:26 AM

5AP Raffle entry for ordinaryredtail's slot raffle!
Enter here for a chance to win a slot to their velvet dom Nokt Harpia!

This is of their bird Nimbus.
Headshot: +0.5
Colored: +1
Shaded: +0.5
Background: +2
Biorhythm: +1
Total = 5

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  • Jun 27, 2020
    The rich colors of the sky is a neat addition, it compliments the plumage of the styx. Adding the hill in the back makes the piece seem more immersive, although the trees on there feel a little too clumped up. If you spread them out more, it would help them feel more natural on the hill, and varying the age/heights of them would further the effect.

    Nice call to have the sloping dirt and the branch in the foreground, it contributes to the piece's sense of depth, I like it. The speckles on the plumage are handled well, they don't feel too even which makes it more natural, and it adds to the serious expression of the stryx.
  • Jun 28, 2020
    Omg the background and the Stryx's colors look so gorgeous!! The sky in particular looks so amazing to me 💛💛