"...As the pup crashes into you, you drop your bag and hold the pup tight. “It will be ok.” You try to soothe the terrified pup. He settles into a sobbing wreck. “What happened?” With all of his sobbing and stammering, the only words you can make out are ‘dark monster’. You decide to help the little guy back to his parents before heading home yourself."
Constructive Critique requested.
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The design of the dragon here is lovely, I like the coloration of it- the olive green fading to white isn't excessively vibrant, so it adds a mellowness of a sorts to it while still being ornate. The burnt orange spots and black stripes work with the main color well to that effect, the contrast and execution of them gives a regal feel to the older dragon.