Manga P.1

Posted Jan 13, 2006, 3:53:28 PM UTC

Well, this is my manga I've been working on. I know it doesn't look hard but pulling it all together is kinda hard. I have the second page done too. I'll send that in tomorrow. BTW, I would really appricate comments on both the art, and what you think of the story line from what you can see of it. Both really matter. Thanks very much!! ^-^

Tools:

a huge amount of different sizes of ink pens... XD

Comments

MoonDemon
Jan 16, 2006, 8:54:42 AM UTC
I want to know more!!!! The plot is interesting and the drawings rock!! I cheated and saw the second one before this one but its all good, LOL.

I love the way manga are done left to right I sometimes wish we wrote like that here because I wouldn't get so much ink on my left hand that way
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- themusicdied
  Jan 16, 2006, 10:46:50 AM UTC
  Thanks! ^o^
  
  Actually, I have to start it going the other way. I'm making this for something Tokyopop does once a year called RSOM. They want it to be from right to left. X_X" So, I'm just going to use my computer to switch these two but from them on it'll be left to right. Stupid English language... lol
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  MoonDemon
  Jan 17, 2006, 9:06:06 AM UTC | Total Edits: 1 | Last edited on Jan 17, 2006 by MoonDemon
  *SNIFFLE SNIFFLE* It's such a shame that they don't want to accept it in true format.
  
  DOWN WITH LEFT TO RIGHT STYLE
  
  I just realized I had it backwards in my other post to you I ment I love them done right to left I'm such a dweeb
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  themusicdied
  Jan 17, 2006, 3:04:03 PM UTC
  Yup. They're like that. Oh well. lol
  
  Nwah, I know what you ment. ^_^
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Saiyangirl4ever
Jan 14, 2006, 2:25:52 AM UTC
Mmmmm...I`m hooked!!!!!*takes popcorn and a bottle of cola*Oooo!This is going to be good!*waits for the next part*
This is awesome hun!I`m hooked!!The 1 page is drawn perfectly and the story is great so far!Keep it up!I love it!Now I`m gonna be excited and curious what`s gonna happen in part 2!Damn !Keep it up!~!!!!!!!!!My love to you!Mwah!
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- themusicdied
  Jan 14, 2006, 6:26:55 AM UTC
  Really? Wow. Thanks!! The second page isn't a lot of words but man... it was a lot to ink. lol
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  Saiyangirl4ever
  Jan 14, 2006, 2:30:27 PM UTC
  Yes hun!!!!Aw...I`m sure the next page will be great!!!It will be great ` cause you`ve put so much work and a piece of your !That`s why it`s gonna be awesome!Believe me,I know what I say!You always put so much love in your piccys!That`s why we love them so much!That`s why we love YOU!!!My biggest love to you!!!!Mwaaaaahhh!
  P.S.I can`t wait for the next page!!!!I`m hooked!!
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  themusicdied
  Jan 14, 2006, 2:47:47 PM UTC
  Wow, that's really nice of you. Hey, is there anything I can do for you in return? I can draw lots of things, just pick what you like. ^-^
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689
Jan 13, 2006, 1:10:52 PM UTC
got a grammar error in there
"some thought she had went to work for the new government..."
try: some thought she left to work for the new government; or something like that? other then that.. i'm liken it! very good, your art in here is niceley done. *is axious to see next page* hehe. wonder what's ganna happen..
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- themusicdied
  Jan 13, 2006, 1:26:03 PM UTC
  Thank you! I'm no good at words. My talents are in my art. I'll change it to that. It sounds better. ^_^
  
  I'll have the next page up tomorrow. It's already done but I have to get it in the computer and I'll be good. ^o^
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  689
  Jan 13, 2006, 8:06:44 PM UTC
  YAY!! lol. *is excited*
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