Thirst

Posted Feb 1, 2006, 6:15:49 PM UTC

Ok on Moondemon suggestion, i redid the eyes, i prefer them this way. Again, i used, pastel, charcoal, sanguine and color pen. Whatcha think?

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  • Feb 2, 2006, 7:53:24 AM UTC
    This bitch is SCARY!! I would hate to meet her in the dark somewhere! Oh No!
    I like the way you made her eyes and her leathery neck, and that wild hair. She reminds me of this crazy chick in the graphic novel for the vampire lestat (I don't know WHY I don't own that yet!!)

    anyway, good job, maybe blend the colors a little more, but other than that it's great Bounce
    • Feb 2, 2006, 3:29:54 PM UTC
      Thanks Kichi!!! You know what i've been working on her to improve and i feel like i've ruined it...again...Laughing Its not that bad but not to my liking. I dunno if i'll post the 'improve' drawing! She is kinda scary, like i said to Moondemon, at first i wanted to draw a woman happily screaming with firey hair...oh well...it turned out like that! Which book were you refering to, i've almost read all the book of the vampire chronicle...sign...I'd love to meet Lestat in a dark alley, sad to think he wouldnt bite us because we've read his books...Smile
      • Feb 3, 2006, 6:00:21 AM UTC
        ah I know how you feel. I try to finish things and fuck them up too.. and as for Lestat, I'd lie. Then he'd read my mind and see I was lying and be like: "Begone wench!"
        lol!
        • Feb 3, 2006, 7:35:16 AM UTC
          Laughing I want to go to New Orlean on rue Royal, just to see if i might catch a glimpse, sometime i believe he exist and asked Anne Rice to be the name behind his book...Laughing Im crazy...
          • Feb 3, 2006, 8:09:40 AM UTC
            nah.. it's a lovely thought.. sigh.. oh yeah I drew a pic for you let me load it quick
  • (anonymous)
    Feb 1, 2006, 7:52:46 PM UTC
    yay! it's finished! *glomps* love it! the color is great and i love the feeling! Grin
  • Feb 1, 2006, 4:09:10 PM UTC
    Oh I really love this Lisi. I adore vampires. And she looks really pissed. Either that or just really really hungry. Laughing Anyway, I really like the eyes. They have sort of a cat-like quality to them because of the way they seem to have a "glow" to them. I have a couple of suggestions about the teeth. I read somewhere that you wanted to re-do the teeth because you weren't happy with them or something. Well, I think the biggest thing with them is that the fang on her left side (not our left side, but hers) should be a bit more elongated. It isn't quite as long as the one on her right. And I think if you soften the lines up that separate each individual tooth, then you will get a more realistic look to them. Yes Just a few things that may help or they may not. I like to pretend that I know what I am talking about even tough I usually don't. But shhh! Don't tell anyone. Laughing But rest assured that she is extremely awesome. I absolutely LOVE the wild, unkempt look of her hair. And I couldn't have thought of a better title for it. Awesome job sweetie. Mwah!
    • Feb 3, 2006, 7:40:51 AM UTC
      Laughing Thanks Kristy...i've decide to wrok on her and now i completely hate it. I'Ve put it in a drawer and i dont want to look at it, i'm angry because i feel like i've ruined it. Laughing I tend to do that...ruin the drawing by overdoing it...Ah well... I've took the advice you said about the teeth, i've made them more the same and i also changed the eyes...i didn't like them. I realised yesterday that i wanted to work too quickly on my drawing, i want to finish them right away...i think its way i ruin them,i'll try to take my time from now on. Sigh!! But thanks a lot, im glad you like her even if i hate her now...lol...Mwah Kristy take care!
      • Feb 3, 2006, 11:10:39 AM UTC
        Smile Aww, it is okay Lisi. I have done that sooo many times. I work on a drawing too much trying to get it perfect and then I completely mess it up somehow. And then all of my hard work was wasted. So, you are not alone sweetheart. Maybe sometime later you can go back to it if you want. it's your call. But in all honesty, alot of people like her this way. Like I said to you before, her eyes (the way they are in this version) have a cat-like quality. You know how a cat's eyes reflect and "glow" in the dark? That's what this reminds me of, so it is really neat. Yes And I used to rush on my drawings too. Most of my earlier drawings were rushed leaving them with a very poor quality. Then I git started on doing realism and I slowed myself down. I actually took the time to pay attention to one certain area making sure the details looked good before I would move on to the next area. And the results were a definite improvement. The only downfall is that you have to commit to the drawing. I have a hard time with that sometimes and it will take me close to a week or more to even get one picture out. Ah well. The more I draw, the faster I will get. Just hang in there love. *hugs*
        • Feb 8, 2006, 9:54:54 AM UTC
          Thanks again, you're so good to me. Smile Well, in a way, its not ruined its different and i learned something by 'overdoing' it a bit. For now on, i'll take my time and do like you, concentrate on every little area so that the drawing is perfect to my eyes. I think i was being to harsh on myself, well we are are own worst critics right! All my love and take care kristy Smile mwah
          • Feb 8, 2006, 10:05:44 AM UTC
            Well sweetheart, you deserve it. Smile And so much more. Just keep pushing forward and you'll get there. Yes Oh and I have finally got my tattoo that I have been planning on getting since last September. I posted a pic of it on my profile page so everyone can see it. Let me know what you think of it okay? Love ya. Mwah!
  • Feb 1, 2006, 4:08:22 PM UTC
    Ooooo, the only advice I'd give is to darken this up a bit my dear...It looks awesome! *psst* I Heart the hair!
    • Feb 3, 2006, 7:42:19 AM UTC
      waaaaaaaaah...thanks Karana, i feel like crying because i feel like i've ruined it...but thanks anyway...Cry
  • Feb 1, 2006, 2:09:40 PM UTC
    Very very cool! I love how it turned out! It's very realistic yet fantasy like Grin
    • Feb 1, 2006, 3:14:01 PM UTC
      Thank you!!! Smile I'll rework on her teeth and eyes, they arent to my liking! Thanks again
  • Feb 1, 2006, 12:14:54 PM UTC
    awesome I love Vamps....This is way cool ...great job...Smile
    • Feb 1, 2006, 12:48:19 PM UTC
      me too, Smile I have to work on the teeth and eyes, they bug me!!! I'm glad you like her! Big Smile Thanks
  • Feb 1, 2006, 10:17:09 AM UTC
    Yeppers, the eyes seem to be more a part of her now, in my humble opinion at least Grin