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April

Posted Mar 18, 2006, 5:01:21 PM
This is the best portrait i've done of my sister, April. looking at it now, i know there is alot of mess ups I need to fix, but I'm stuck. Does anyone have any suggestions? I know the eyes are beady, but I'm not sure how to fix that.

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  • Mar 18, 2006
    OOO very nice! I am loving your shading. I bet your sister likes it very much. A suggestion I have is you can can make the face look a little more detailed. And what I mean by that is...when you look at it it should look like it has shape...no so flat. I can see you did a great job with the nose. Just try with the cheeks that would make it look great. Nice job so far!! Smile

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