There are many paths to success. Show how your character changes their element. Do they seek out a mentor? Do they go searching for a magical item? Do they spend hours in the library researching? Do they train themselves by sheer force of will?
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When Veronica lost her ability to talk to him, Sigue grew distraught. As Veronica took her time to meditate and attempt to refocus herself - granted, at first it was just to stop the drowning nightmares - he stayed by her side, pushing his own power against hers to bring his best friend back to him...
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It still feels a bit flat to me, but I think that might be a shading thing at this point... maybe not enough depth. Hopefully the more I do it, the better it'll get!