The Kiss

Posted Apr 9, 2006, 7:31:35 PM
Awww, I :heart: this piccy. Ok its two of my characters Miari (girl) and Ry-ry (boy). Ry-ry has had a crush on Miari ever since she found him. :) and now he showed his true feelings for her, she seems to feel the same way too! ;) :heart: :heart:

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  • Aug 1, 2006
    Awww how sweet Heart
  • Apr 9, 2006
    Awe- that's sweet Smile I'm a little nastier to my characters- they're always glad to get what I give them- eventually! XD What kind of critical comments do you want on this hon?
    • Apr 10, 2006
      Well I really don't know, probably some comments to improve my picture Smile
      • Apr 10, 2006
        First thing- I don't know how you ink, but use a black ink pen- it'll shapen up your lines, and make them blacker. A helpfull thing for drawing pictures of people kissing when you're not use to it is having a photo referance. The net is great for this, or go through stock photos in Deviantart. Every tenth pic is either a girl x boy or same sex kissing pic in the stock piles ^^; I keep a special section on my computer for referance pics as I come across them. Large grey scales for practicing at later dates, clothing referances, poses, and kissing- which is HARD.
        Another big point to note is body stance. The guys stance it that of a guy that deaply cares for the girl, and has finally got her, but she is in a shy and withdrawn stance, which makes the couple uncertain, and him too dominating rather than mutual. What is beter, is if her hands were around him or down- not stopping him from comming closer. Bodys facing is intimate, sideways is friendship, and oppositing is hostile. Handy to remember- this applys to most pics. If someone pushes someone away, then there is hostility, and pulling in is closeness.

        Some examples are (Sorry, I'm gonna use my art cause I can't be bother surfing ^^; )- Both facing eachother totally, and both pulling the other closer- VERY intimate Bodies facing, touching eachother, but her face is turned away- deap friendship but not quite love at this point Backs to eachother, but hands linking. Hostility between the two of them for reasons, but they secretly have feelings for the other that they can't share Bodies facing away from eachother, but one is holding the other, the other oblivious- Person has secret feelings for the other that they can't show for some reason.

        This make any sence? It can be aplied to alot of poses. A scene can mean a heap of different things depending on how the body interacts with the surroundings. In the last pic, the guy is holding his sword, but looking toward the guy- that can be taking as him putting the other guy on a higher level to his sword- which is true.
        • Apr 10, 2006
          Wow, I never really realised that! Thanks so much! Big Smile Ill try and remeber that for later pics of them, your awsome!