Just my attempt to color The Angel Drawing. I modeled it after my friend, but when I colored it I totally changed it. She is taned,brown hair and eyes. Funny thing is it looks like her in Black and white.
Shoulders are much too broad which makes her upper back seem unnaturally thick. Shoulders are usually pretty propotionate to the hips, use them as a reference. This can be easily fixed. I think it would look a lot better if you just slimmed up the upper back