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Dolphiny Sora

Posted May 23, 2006, 3:03:07 AM
I would really like some critique on this.. it is not finished (but NO critique on colouring for that is'nt finished) I would only like critique on the proportions of him.. cuz those are hard X_X
If posible provide some visual critiqe? :3
PS: KDH2 ish awesome!

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  • May 23, 2006
    Actually his tail needs to be longer I think. I would make the tail as long as normal legs and the tips of your fingers extend to mid thigh, they seem about at knee- level here. Hope that helps ;D
  • May 23, 2006
    His tail looks like It needs to be a little longer, but the proprotions look right to me. The coloring you have done so far looks great too. Just make Sora's tail longer and It'll be good. ^.~ *FAVES*
    • May 23, 2006
      *scratches head* I think you're right. XD; Thank you ^_^
  • May 23, 2006
    The Breast/shoulder area seem abit big but it could be just me
    • May 24, 2006
      I like to make them big sometimes XD;; Makes the characters look stronger *3*
  • May 23, 2006
    I know how you feel I'm not so great with proportions but i hope this helps. I think his hands are a bit big and also his head. Two heads should fit in his torso here it looks as if only one and a half can and also I think his tail should be a bit longer. anyways I hope that helped you out Yes
    • May 24, 2006
      Well.. since he is Sora from KDH.. his head and hands are supposed to be really big XD; And I already knew about the tail thing.. everyone's pointed that out so far. But anyways thanks! ^^;
  • May 24, 2006
    I think so far you are doing pretty good. this is a REALLY hard pose.

    I did do a little visual crit for you but its such a tough position that i don't think i even got it right.

    Just a couple things to really watch for is his hips are a little wide, the shapes of his forearms need some reshaping. And also the mermaid part could probably be a little longer.
    Image attached
    • May 24, 2006
      Thank you very much! And actually in KDH2, his hips in this form are rather big.. tis what makes him look more adult I guess o: But I don't know if I made it look right. XD; Anyways thanks! :3
    • May 24, 2006
      Oh yesh and thanks so much for the visual critique! Me must get used to the feature I did'nt see it the first time XD; I think it will help improve my pic yes :3
  • May 24, 2006
    ooOOooo, the color is great! I think his body is a bit short though, that's all! It's wonderful!! xD
    • May 24, 2006
      Thank you! Big Smile
      Excuse number 21424321432: Sora ish short so it's fine with me I think XD;
      Thanks still :3
  • May 26, 2006
    wow, must fav
  • May 28, 2006
    His upper body is just fine, to me. And I realli like his face, but I think the fish like part (I know, but it's 9 in the morning do you realli expect me to remember what it's called Knock Out) I think it's too short and thins out a little too quickly at the bottom. I think thats all you need to fix. I hope that helped. Smile
    • May 28, 2006
      Okee. People keep pointing that out. So I know already now. But thankies anyways.
      • May 29, 2006
        Sorri, I didn't even read the other comments. (Kicks self) Laughing

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