I would really like some critique on this.. it is not finished (but NO critique on colouring for that is'nt finished) I would only like critique on the proportions of him.. cuz those are hard X_X
If posible provide some visual critiqe? :3
PS: KDH2 ish awesome!
His upper body is just fine, to me. And I realli like his face, but I think the fish like part (I know, but it's 9 in the morning do you realli expect me to remember what it's called ) I think it's too short and thins out a little too quickly at the bottom. I think thats all you need to fix. I hope that helped.
I think so far you are doing pretty good. this is a REALLY hard pose.
I did do a little visual crit for you but its such a tough position that i don't think i even got it right.
Just a couple things to really watch for is his hips are a little wide, the shapes of his forearms need some reshaping. And also the mermaid part could probably be a little longer.
Thank you very much! And actually in KDH2, his hips in this form are rather big.. tis what makes him look more adult I guess o: But I don't know if I made it look right. XD; Anyways thanks! :3
Oh yesh and thanks so much for the visual critique! Me must get used to the feature I did'nt see it the first time XD; I think it will help improve my pic yes :3
I know how you feel I'm not so great with proportions but i hope this helps. I think his hands are a bit big and also his head. Two heads should fit in his torso here it looks as if only one and a half can and also I think his tail should be a bit longer. anyways I hope that helped you out
Well.. since he is Sora from KDH.. his head and hands are supposed to be really big XD; And I already knew about the tail thing.. everyone's pointed that out so far. But anyways thanks! ^^;
His tail looks like It needs to be a little longer, but the proprotions look right to me. The coloring you have done so far looks great too. Just make Sora's tail longer and It'll be good. ^.~ *FAVES*
Actually his tail needs to be longer I think. I would make the tail as long as normal legs and the tips of your fingers extend to mid thigh, they seem about at knee- level here. Hope that helps ;D
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Excuse number 21424321432: Sora ish short so it's fine with me I think XD;
Thanks still :3
I did do a little visual crit for you but its such a tough position that i don't think i even got it right.
Just a couple things to really watch for is his hips are a little wide, the shapes of his forearms need some reshaping. And also the mermaid part could probably be a little longer.
Thank you ^_^