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I decided to join the fanart contest on Bulma.nl and this is my submission. I hope I'll win! As usual you can see that those people are Vegeta and Bulma, but they aren't really them. I just cannot seem to master the style of Dragonball, even after all of these years. Almost no-one is able to tell me what the problem is with my fanart. I've had some suggestions about the mouths with this drawing, because someone thought they were both too big for Vegeta and Bulma. Could be so, but I would like to see how you guys feel about it.
Constructive Critique requested. See Tips.