Derith

Posted Aug 16, 2006, 2:00:21 AM UTC

If any of you have ever read the Terrathune Chronicles that was one of my first submissions. Here is Derith, one of the main characters of the story. It's been awhile since my friend and I have worked on it, but now for us school is starting again and that's when productivity goes up as well. I chose anime/manga style because it fits me. Also, expect more of the story to be updated and renewed.

Hope you all enjoyed this picture as much as I made it. :) Tell me what you think.

Update: Forgot to correct the tilt in the picture. Thanks Arkillian.

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  • Aug 16, 2006, 9:59:23 AM UTC
    Thanks for the constructive critiques. Smile I'll get to work on those things.
  • Aug 16, 2006, 3:48:15 AM UTC
    I think the feet could use a bit of definition; the (our) right one has a flat sole when it probably should be flat. The (our) right should probably be foreshortened, since it is drawn in an overhead view, when the image is drawn from a much lower angle.

    The folds of the clothes seem a bit over done; taking the assumption they are baggy, they don't need as many folds at the top of the thighs (and (our) left arm) since the material will hang off the solid area literally straight down under it bunches up on the next solid thing, like the top of the boot or his hands. You might find it helpful to use real life references (even with what you are wearing Tongue) for the folds.

    Hope that helps- and I have to say, I do rather like the design of the outfit. Big Smile
  • Aug 15, 2006, 7:43:45 PM UTC
    First thing- tilt him up straight. He's on a 45 degree angle at the moment. Make him upright and I'll help you ^^

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