There's something about this picture that just keeps bringing me back to it... ^.^ Another word of advice, try using lighter lines when you're doing your initial 'sketch'. That way, when you have something you don't like, you can erase it! Then, after you're sure you like everything, make your dark lines. I think trying that technique will show a world of difference. ^.^
the dot is my vanishing point yes. but it supposed to look like a tunnel through the moutains in the distance, hence the need for the road as well. if i was to use lighter line as i have attempted before, it would end up that the entire picture would look a bad as the moutians do.