Sucks that this is on lined paper. I want to outline it in PhotoShop, so I'm marking it "unfinished". Hopefully I get the chance to mess around with some software at school (I don't have any fancy software at home, so it may take a while).
Anyway. Link and Zelda were made for each other. This was me experimenting with kissing—or at least getting close. I like the way their heads are turned, and I love the little details. There are only three qualms I have with it:
1) Zelda's left foot. Looks like it's on a stool or something.
2) Link's right foot. Ditto. (These are just me getting the perspective wrong...)
3) Zelda's left hand. Why does it look so odd? Like it's coming out of nowhere....
Constructive Critique requested. See Tips.