Comment 139371

Comment ID 139371

Jan 30, 2023, 9:50:25 AM UTC on [Writing] Occupational Hazard

I love this. I love Paiko. This is amazing

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Scatteriskity
Jan 30, 2023, 1:48:02 PM UTC
Thank you Wyv! <3 I had fun writing Quinn, hope I did him justice ^-^

It was 90% exposition before the little bit at the end that actually had to do with the "job" prompt hahaa... got a bit carried away
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- Wyverntoots
  Jan 31, 2023, 12:40:54 AM UTC
  You did!!!!
  
  Getting carried away is fine, you conveyed the characters so well and the story flows nicely
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