Comment 139373

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Jan 30, 2023, 9:50:25 AM UTC
I love this. I love Paiko. This is amazing Dance Heart

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Jan 30, 2023, 1:48:02 PM UTC on [Writing] Occupational Hazard
Thank you Wyv! <3 I had fun writing Quinn, hope I did him justice ^-^

It was 90% exposition before the little bit at the end that actually had to do with the "job" prompt hahaa... got a bit carried away Giggle

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  • Jan 31, 2023, 12:40:54 AM UTC
    You did!!!! Grin

    Getting carried away is fine, you conveyed the characters so well and the story flows nicely Heart