Comment 141518
Comment ID 141518
AaaHH that was so much fun to read (I know they're only looking at the first 1200 words for judging, but your writing keeps me hooked to the very end)!
Love how you depicted both sides, makes it more cinematic
Ooh, and that last bit when Ghost-eye figured out how Suave's missiles worked - it forced him to give up that last one or risk being burned :O
Love how you depicted both sides, makes it more cinematic
Ooh, and that last bit when Ghost-eye figured out how Suave's missiles worked - it forced him to give up that last one or risk being burned :O
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