Comment 18069

Well I am totally going against my pride here because I am not sure if you will delete this or not, but I am offering my advice as a fellow artist. First off, I agree with Melissa that Inuyasha'a neck should be a bit wider, and the beads of subjugation look great, so you should leave those how you have them. His sleeves (where the white shirt he wears shows through) should be down about to his bicep area. As for the muscles for Vegeta, the problem you are having is that you have 2 separate "bumps" for the muscles whereas it should all flow smoothly together. I am going to do a sketch before I go to bed and post it so you can see what I mean and how to achieve the DBZ muscles. Veggie's eyes look pretty good though too. As for the guy in the middle, I have my thoughts as to who he is, but I won't say it just yet. It will be neat to see the finished picture and see if I am right.