Comment 20066

Ah... I see you finished it in CP. Well no matter because I love the way you color with colored pencils anyway. Anywhoo, I agree that Ed should have maybe been placed on the other side of Vegeta because you have so much red bunched right there. Don't get me wrong, it doesn't look too bad and red IS my favorite color. Another thing I might suggest is maybe putting a bit more black into Vegeta's hair. The white "shine" in his hair should be a bit more subtle. Keep the shape you have, but just make it smaller by filling it in a bit more with black. The shading looks wnderful. Especially on Vegeta's body. And I see you gave him back his eyebrows. All in all, I think it turned out great and I really really like Vegeta's body. Did I say that already? Great job Chris. ^_^