Mmmm...I do love your intensity! ^_^ There's just a way you make your Saiyans kiss that hits home. It's not overtly romantic (though a bit of that does come through), but it's not all blood, lust, and passion, either. A very nice balancing act you have here.
The only thing that really stands for correction is the size of their hands. While being very well formed, I tend to think that they would be bigger.
Hmmm...yes, I think you're right. Now that I'm looking at it again, it does seem that their hands should be bigger. Indeed, I do have trouble scaling everything. Thank you so much, for the constructive criticism!
You're welcome! I truly do love your work and even though the hands could be larger, they're still VERY well done. I find myself eager for your next work, though I'd never presume to rush you. ^_^ It's obvious you take great care with each piece and it shows.
*Angelus