I think so far you are doing pretty good. this is a REALLY hard pose.
I did do a little visual crit for you but its such a tough position that i don't think i even got it right.
Just a couple things to really watch for is his hips are a little wide, the shapes of his forearms need some reshaping. And also the mermaid part could probably be a little longer.
Thank you very much! And actually in KDH2, his hips in this form are rather big.. tis what makes him look more adult I guess o: But I don't know if I made it look right. XD; Anyways thanks! :3
I did do a little visual crit for you but its such a tough position that i don't think i even got it right.
Just a couple things to really watch for is his hips are a little wide, the shapes of his forearms need some reshaping. And also the mermaid part could probably be a little longer.