Comment 47810
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Yeah, sure, that'd be great! Any tips you can give would really be appreciated. I know it looks kinda awkward at times, so... whatever. Thanks! 
Comment ID 47810
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Sorry for taking so long. Here it is. Ok a couple things to watch out for. The first thing I noticed is that Link is off balance. If these two were real right now Zelda would be a pancake because Link would fall ontop of her. All of his weight is resting on her.
The way to determine where a person has their weight is by drawing a strait line down from their nose to the ground. See the arrow in the attached crit.
As you see, both of Links legs are to one side of the arrow. This means he's off balance. A person that is in balance will have that arrow placed where their weight is. For example, if a character is leaning on his left foot, his nose should be above that foot. If a character had his weight evenly distributed between both feet, the arrow would be between the feet.
Also, Link's torso is a bit too short. his belt should be more where the blue line is.
Hope this helps
I hope you do a finished version.
The way to determine where a person has their weight is by drawing a strait line down from their nose to the ground. See the arrow in the attached crit.
As you see, both of Links legs are to one side of the arrow. This means he's off balance. A person that is in balance will have that arrow placed where their weight is. For example, if a character is leaning on his left foot, his nose should be above that foot. If a character had his weight evenly distributed between both feet, the arrow would be between the feet.
Also, Link's torso is a bit too short. his belt should be more where the blue line is.
Hope this helps
I hope you do a finished version.
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