Comment 48284

Comment ID 48284

[Art] Tatsuha  Yuki's Bro
Dec 30, 2006, 9:46:53 AM UTC | Total Edits: 1 | Last edited on Dec 30, 2006 by Zironix on [Art] Tatsuha Yuki's Bro
Not bad! The clothes look pretty good and I like the expressions. What I think you could improve on is the head structure; notice that their head look a bit stretched/slanted. This could have happened it you didn't draw it on a table or drew it looking at the page at an angle (I do that a lot Grin lol). I've attached a visual critique to help you help you understand what the heck I'm talking about. YesThumbs Up

Otherwise, this is a pretty good drawing. I hope to see it finished soon!

P.S. Gravitation!! Dance
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  • Dec 30, 2006, 3:42:34 PM UTC
    Thank you ^_^ and i see what you mean, i was kinda tired at the time and wasn't concentrating lol, but thank u for the advice, i really appreciate it! Smile