Comment 49523

Comment ID 49523

[Art] You are an Angel
Jan 26, 2007, 2:48:49 AM UTC on [Art] You are an Angel
The image is far too dark.Mad If I squint I can see crosses in the backround,but the middle ground (aka the rock) blends in with the backround! So while the angel is bright and the snakes melt into the picture, there's only 2 levels of contrast-incredibly bright or incredibly dark. You completly leave out normal light, middle tone,and normal dark. (Not the exact names, but you get the point. 5 elements of shading.)You can still have a dark picture but you need to even it out. There's halftone on the snakes and angel, but the rock and foreground should have some normal dark and halftone.

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  • Jan 26, 2007, 3:13:31 AM UTC
    Thank you for suck a detailed comment)

    Hmmm it was sort of meant to be this way... I tried to make clear contrast between the angel and everything else. And didnt bother with the details and shading the rock so that the most attention would be on his face.

    But you aren't the only one who didn't like it so I guess I failed with this idea ) I'll keep it in mind next time )
    • Jan 26, 2007, 3:36:38 AM UTC
      If at first you don't succeed, try and try again! Wink The contrast was just a little to high is all.
  • Jan 31, 2007, 10:29:42 PM UTC
    I agree with some of the comments made by eegirlee. I think the background's contrast is too low. I didn't notice the crosses at all until I read her crit. In general it is a good idea to have the background have less contrast to create atmospheric perspective and depth, but i think in this case, there isn't enough contrast between the red and black for the cross. Part of this could be due to your monitor's settings. On your monitor, it may be clear as day that the crosses are separate from the background, but on everyone elses it's different. look into calibrating your monitor.
    • Feb 1, 2007, 12:48:48 AM UTC
      You guessed just right - crosses look neat on my iMac and rather good when printed.
      I checked other computers too and saw the background almost black...

      Thank you for the comment )
      • Feb 1, 2007, 12:54:14 AM UTC
        no problemo. see? i know what i'm talking about Wink Laughing