At first glance this is good, but looking closer I see a few flaws. Something tells me I shouldn't see cheeks through her legs, and her elbows wouldn't be that pink and shiney unless she went wild with the lip gloss. Her left eye is rolling into her head, and the top of her head looks like a helmet.
Okay, well, the elbow thing is just a common effect used. You don't put lip gloss on your elbows, silly! xD And what do you mean by rolling into her head? Me no comprede'. D: