Firstly: thumbs up for going the realism approach with this (there's too much anime these days)
I think it'd be greater if you could put more charcoal/graphite to the paper (i.e. shade darker), because it is rather light and hard to see here- unless that's the effect you're after.
thank you! yeah, i'm of trying to darken this and then resubmitting it. they always seem to come out much lighter when i scan them in. thanks again for commenting!
I think it'd be greater if you could put more charcoal/graphite to the paper (i.e. shade darker), because it is rather light and hard to see here- unless that's the effect you're after.
Great work!