Comment 63178

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FireAngelStudios
Dec 4, 2007, 8:43:27 AM UTC
Looks great. Even for a WIP it beats the hell out of anything in my gallery >.> *Insert Jealousy Here*

Also I think the girl in the background is cute, though I'm not sure exactly what she's supposed to be doing. I'd guess cowering, and if that's the case then yes a different pose might convey it a little better. =3

Comment ID 63178

[Art] A Battle
kenji
Dec 4, 2007, 5:00:48 PM UTC on [Art] A Battle
Humm no she isn't really cowering. Its suppose to looks as if she is trying to get out of the way by backing up, then something on the ground trips her and she falls, landing on her back. Well thats how it goes in the book anyway. I had a hard time choosing her pose though. I tried with her hands downish and that didn't work at all. I know putting them over her head will make it look silly. At the same time Im trying to use her to balance the picture... Sorry Im typing so much ^^

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  • FireAngelStudios
    Dec 5, 2007, 11:03:56 AM UTC
    Heh, ahh. I see. You could try with one hand held outward and the other up against her chest, might give more of that expression... or at least that's what I'd see in my head. Only a suggestion though, still looks great as it is. ^_^